Acid Test Comments

great thoughts on which to ponder, as humanity as a whole is destruction at its climax

very fine...poem mind blowing.....

Kind of puts many things in one shopping bag.

Peaceful social life is becoming a tale of gone days, life is chaotic, and lawbreaker are roaring monsters in the civil life.........you have given a true picture....

May be it has become part and necessities Everybody wants to capitalize and understands its utilities

Are we not becoming intolerant society? Gruesome murders, riots stabbing in different varieties

Yes people are lovers of themselves! ...with no natural affection for one another this definitely captures and describes the air of the world we live in today... good poem

This poem should have a better flow...

Yes; time is essence and a powerful acid test! Great thought!

I really like this one. good work

Its not war between right and wrong but between two rights. Thanks for thoughtful poem as usual Sir. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

Powerful, evocative and engaging!

Lots of pertinent questions for this era... unfortunately man is inverted in his belief of his god and of himself. I have said before... when man starts to really believe in god then man will let god do his/her work... As for man... considering his DNA is dominated by virus codes is it any wonder he behaves like a virus. Like your work mate... fine poem, well written with a poet's heart.

Humanity is getting drained out day by day in this present world What shall we do? Rgds Nooruddeen

On the name of religion we simply kill each other Humanity on run and no one takes care or bother

Are we not becoming intolerant society? Gruesome murders, riots stabbing in different varieties? May be it has become part and necessities

Thousands are killed in day light scene Flash with bodies scattered and all over seen May be we still don’t need peace or respite Nature has turned eye on us still we ignite

On the name of religion we simply kill each other Humanity on run and no one takes care or bother Shame, hatred curse all have taken front seat No regrets and no face to show or eyes to meet...........so very true(mostly) ....... its powerful.........loved it..... ;)

Are we not wholly to be blamed? Bloodbath in the name of peace claimed

May be it has become part and necessities Everybody wants to capitalize and understands it utilities