Aching Souls Poem by Houda Boukassoula

Aching Souls

Rating: 4.5


More souls are aching
As people are failing
To see their suffering
Lips keep distorting
What hearts are feeling
and what souls are seeking
Words aren't missing
But other hearts are faking
Never sensed a feeling
Fragrance is lacking
Despite the trimming
More souls are aching
For salvation looking
In vain they're trying
To settle a meaning
In what is appearing
To be the prevailing
Significance of feeling

Monday, January 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2018

Fragrance is lacking More souls are aching.... a fine poem and how you succeeded in ending the verses with ing.......... very nice dear poetess. tony

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Houda Boukassoula 01 April 2018

Thanks a lot for your appreciating comments dear Dr.tony Brahmin

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