Friday, April 18, 2008

Aching Heart - A Wealth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not being loved
Other hand, Love betrays.
Disgust for lust
Suicidal Hearts.
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Mamta Agarwal 06 February 2010

aching heart- a wealth; its a matter of perspective. it makes some creative others just sit and whine some drown sorrows in wine. but Vidi philosophises and makes a virtue out of it in her inimtable style i read and ponder a while. Mamta

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Rakesh Bedi 18 July 2009

.... whether poetry or prose/prominent is pain.....; i dont know how can one write without PAIN? ? ?

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

Aching heart is really a wealth...well said Vidi...a heart aches, for it feels...and that way it tries to shed a lot of grief...would a granite stone feel any ache? Good poem well composed...thanks...10

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rago rago 28 April 2009

Aching heart.........a wonderful remarkable title for a poem. We should make our heart joyful.......then only it will generate and generosity comeout. When the heart ache increase in quantum........we may loose our wealth, yet as a poem I do agree with the rhythmic and beautiful presentaion. Many a thanks for your kind sharing.

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Mamta Agarwal 17 May 2008

an ache in the heart makes one turn inward, and out of that comes wisdom, forbearance. pain is inevitable but suffering is optional. thoughtful poem Vidhi

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Mamta Agarwal 17 May 2008

an ache in the heart makes one turn inward, and out of that comes wisdom, forbearance. pain is inevitable but suffering is optional. thoughtful poem Vidhi

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Gregory Collins 18 April 2008

what if the wealth is the wish to cry your heart out, the petals we should blame the breeze for. should the labor lost be hanging on our children this poem gets more entangled against its wish truly surprising me more and more

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