Saturday, May 6, 2006

Achilles Last Stand Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the sunny shores of Illum,
Achilles rode his chariot
Towards the city of Troy,
And there the god-like Achilles
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Charlie F. Kane
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Shannon Nagel 19 September 2007

Your imagery is so powerful! I loved reading this story. You kept my attention all the way through! Good write! Shannon

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Kailynd McGregor 14 December 2006

again i write magnificent, i love history, and i love the story of Achilles, and you captured the essence of him. so great job! ~Kailynd

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Goldy Locks 06 May 2006

excellent description of historical event. i like the concise flow of this one, it is hard to remain both interesting & informative at times. Sus/

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Charlie F. Kane

Charlie F. Kane

Solihull, Birmingham
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