On the sunny shores of Illum,
Achilles rode his chariot
Towards the city of Troy,
And there the god-like Achilles
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again i write magnificent, i love history, and i love the story of Achilles, and you captured the essence of him. so great job! ~Kailynd
excellent description of historical event. i like the concise flow of this one, it is hard to remain both interesting & informative at times. Sus/
Your imagery is so powerful! I loved reading this story. You kept my attention all the way through! Good write! Shannon