Tuesday, January 16, 2007

Achilles Heel Comments

Rating: 4.5

So concerned with vanity,
That I chipped a nail
I walked along the beach at day
Not knowing the beauty of night
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Greenwolfe 1962 28 September 2008

I love the creativity. Sometimes writers get too cute with their creativity and make the poem totally incomprehensible . This was not done here. How wonderful! GW62

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