Saturday, June 16, 2007

Achilles Goes Shopping Comments

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Gripping the cart, knuckles white with fear
He gazed what seemed a mile of aisle
Cases stacked full with dreamy whipped
Flavor on flavor of cool refreshing
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Laurence Overmire
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Chuck Audette 13 August 2007

Ha! With your war carriage of shopping cart, and mighty spoon, it is good you gave that ice cream an honorable death... Although you might be dragging the weight for a while, don't let anyone hector you about your looks.. -chuck

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Sandra Fowler 16 June 2007

Very amusing, but somehow a bit sad as well. Human nature never changes. Excellent write. Good to read you again. Kind wishes, Sandra

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