Achiever Comments

Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal No one can steal the show or put the seal At the end of journey, luck may smile Pain may subside even when you walk for while Good ending. Unless a commitment to work and taking risk and responsibilities the achievement will not be attained. Good writing. best wishes: Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram.

Person who is seized with problems may excel In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail

I acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support In case of no moral support what it could be? Will it be considered as downfall of big tree?

I stongly agree with you that in every success there is a commitment. That is as saying that any honour that involves no risk is not worthy to be called honour.Your poem is an inspirator to those who wishes to excel in life without considering the amount of risk involved. I love this poem.

Yes; that indeed is an achievement! Achieving the unachievable and reaching the unreachable is indeed an ACHIEVEMENT!

Good write.......nicely expressed

Good write.......Hasmukh

Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity... I`m speachless.... that much i loved ur poem! really thanks for sharing, for the fountain of ur wisdom we are poured

oh thispoem spke to me much..truth and wisdom in it's beautiful verses..loved it.. Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal No one can steal the show or put the seal At the end of journey, luck may smile Pain may subside even when you walk for while

Person who is seized with problems may excel In adverse situation he or she may stand and prevail Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain ......................... Very well said..You are full of wisdom

acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support

It’s very hard to pursue goal in adversity Nothing comes true if you go with simplicity Bold approach with strong resolve and good quality Ultimately may earn you respect without any pity...very true...beautifully rhymed...regards...thanks for your wonderful comments

Loss or bad luck can be changed into favour and gain Less sweat even when efforts fail and go into drain

it seems as if you vent into your poetry, it's a lovely habit to have, I've noticed that when one vents, the most beautiful words come out

I acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support In case of no moral support what it could be?

acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support In case of no moral support what it could be? Will it be considered as downfall of big tree

‘What human mind believes it can achieve’. Napoleon Hill ‘Achievement is entirely due to dedication and zeal’ Dedication and zeal flows out from flood gate of belief. Zealously ten dr.sakti Cordially invite to read and comment on my poems

I acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support

acknowledge the outcome of efforts May be it is possible with little support

In case of no moral support what it could be? Will it be considered as downfall of big tree?