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A distinct tone of satire is manifested with the hitherto feats achieved by the most intellectual creation of God (?) on earth. This poetic rendering is also a focus on the sham show of our modesty eventually we are facing in our relationships and dealings with each other.

You are a fabulous poet and show so much feeling in your poems! Every word you write is true, and that is a rare, great gift. Keep on writing x

It is so true that we human beings were given a most wonderful gift which is the world around us, incuding each other, and we misuse and abuse both. I think this poem expresses this very well and with much feeling. If it were a petition you could add my name.

I can feel your agony! ! Its a real way to make yourself and take out your pain, and that writing poems. Keep it up.