Thursday, June 20, 2013

Achievements Comments

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Whatever you have got
With less

or hard effort
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

if we strive to achieve we will succeed. Inside is a silver line, a sky nourish it as you nourish a sapling. lovely thought. hb

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 June 2013

Achievements: unsatisfying greed is the wings of Satan Dil mange more

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 June 2013

Hard earned achievements have real value and those earned by fluke go away. Nicely developed poem.

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