Achieve Comments

great poem. I enjoyed the read.

It is a call for realising one's potential and aim for bigger accomplishments in life than being run of the mill stuff. Thanks for this small yet amazingly beautiful poem.

Well said Dave. Taking the path least trodden, taking your life in stride and doing things your own way. Being your own mental image not anyone else's. Like this one very much. RoseAnn

Simple, sweet and to the point.

this poem is like a sweet surprise gift. thanku mr walker

Great piece of advice poetically expressed in these nice verses. Excellent poem

A great thought clad in a simple apparel....nice poem!

I agree, all about pushing the envelope. I liked the way you expressed it. Great write.

Oh how wonderful Dave, I love this one, being in your essence and feeling your own flow, just that. Thank you.

good advice to find out what one can do with their own mind and hands...

be what you're called to be... yourself!

Really a great poem! ! ! !

good write, be true to yourself, don`t follow the crowd. a good thought,