Monday, August 3, 2009

Ache Comments

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The ache of my bosom
Is such, that it needs
The bite of your teeth
To make it ache
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Aparna Chatterjee
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"The mark of your teeth… (on my bosom) …making me ache for you".. nice

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Lalitha iyer 28 April 2010

My bosom bleeds yet I feed yes, the touch of the infant teeth it hugs it quite desperate that my forget my aches and milk the hapless babe when the babe chews it I cry in pain the mischief it plays again yet my mother does not refrain to shower divine power to drain........

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Lalitha iyer 28 April 2010

My bosom bleeds yet I feed yes, the touch of the infant teeth it hugs it quite desperate that my forget my aches and milk the hapless babe when the babe chews it I cry in pain the mischief it plays again yet my mother does not refrain to shower divine power to drain........

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Braja K Sarkar 19 February 2010

The bite of one's heart is more powerful than a bite of teeths..It leads to the deepest feelings of LOVE.... What do you think, dear Poet? I have enjoyed the poem.

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Marieta Maglas 02 October 2009

nice sad lyric poem...touching.....10

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