Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Aceldama Comments

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Crimson eyes awaken,
as the smell of blood arouses,
I lie in turmoil wondering what has been,
yet I already know.....
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Crimson Love
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Stan Petrovich 24 November 2011

Judas Iscariot? (I looked up 'Alcaldema'.) I thinks there is much more here than meets the eye. All the cutlery images are terrifying, and so apt.

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Bella Hernandez 23 November 2011

Beautiful poem! ! ! exactly what i know and feel everyday... trying to quit is torcherous but must be done great poem truely beautiful! ! ~Bella

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Vipins Puthooran 22 November 2011

It's an excellent poem, the fluctuations of mind I can see here, , , well written! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 22 November 2011

It's an excellent poem, the fluctuations of mind I can see here, , , well written! ! !

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Rashid Iskandar 22 November 2011

amazing.. amazing.. amazing... a very good poem.. :)

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Pete Rivera 22 November 2011

this is my kind of poem...deep and emotional...love it

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Fadwa Gmiden 22 November 2011

Great one keep in good work

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Dave Walker 22 November 2011

Like it. Dark and full of emotion. A great poem.

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