Ace Of My Heart Comments

I really like this one, with the analogy to a card game. Well done.

An original quirky poem avout falling for someone who can see through your facade! ! Loved it! !

It looks like you are playing your cards right, an interesting enjoyable poem.

Excellent piece! I love the metaphor with the cards! Excuse the pun but you went all in and played that hand perfectly. You've got talent! I love poems like this, this is exactly the type of genre that I gravitate towards. Maybe because we write kind of in a similar fashion. Hope it's okay if I add you to my favorites list. I've only been here three days, so you will be my first!