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Just like a paradox...contradictory on surface, but has an important meaning...Bravo!
Your talent make short sound big...it a few words but lot of meaning..deeper scence! _Unwritten Soul
this is rather a cool poem, short bt glorious.'undress and embrace'-i love the two words.
Wow. I like it. Seemed simple at first, but the more I look, it seems complex. Hmmm. Very interesting. Sensuous.
Dear Nivedita, You have the knack of depicting beautiful imagery with your creativity.You are on par with keats.It is no exaggeration. yours lovingly, JVL NARASIMHA RAO INDIA
this poem has the power of instant recognition of meaning with a huge capiital M, oozing with simplicity mmm....10/10
surprisingly short and graceful. the vivd picture of the sole existance.make me turned twice thnx for the emotion.and the invite
Surprised...at first i read it many time try to catch what u want to us understand...now i got it...yeah what a slow 'processor' of mine today lol...hey it is wonderful...give me a smile and beautiful hope! thanks niv, like it so much 10/10... :)
Your verse expresses the phenomenon of surrendipity. Terse and rhytmic.Thanks for sharing.10/10
God's comfort is the most comfortable...i just throw myself in his heaven to forget stress and anger...it's highly metaphorical that i didn't understand first..ah like shakespeare, milton and keats.....EVE NIV thanks for sharing
With Grace this was written that we may find grace in these words. Thanks for sharing
It is an intricate one, inspired with connotation to Bhagavat Geetha(Ch.2: 22-23) in detailing body(dress) soul(the one long for union) . To holy Bible(Genesis.3: 19) 'you are dust, and to dust thou shall return Soul gets solace only in heavenly union.'Frankness is needed in mundane love.Fine.
I love this.great poem?