Saturday, October 20, 2012

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Simply its so beautiful
As you have made all these things.
You knew, whom to give legs to walk,
And To whom to give the wings.
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Akanksha Bhatt
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Cierrah Smiles 01 December 2012

Beautiful write i really like it :)

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 04 November 2012

Definitely, I have the dearth of words to praise this one....SIMPLY BRILLIANT....

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Indranil Bhaduri 26 October 2012

Beautiful thoughts... Loved it...

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Kevin Patrick 22 October 2012

Very good, very prescient and advance thoughts for a girl your age, really like the second last stanza really converges with the thoughts I have on beliefs. A beautiful write about the nature of God

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So Close 22 October 2012

excellent work...! ! we are all under the same roof...we breath the same air, we love the same breeze, we all have the same feel.....then why people split in the name of religion..... Akanksha you are right we have only one god we are all brothers and sisters....: -) »so close«

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Sanjay Mehta 21 October 2012

There is an moot question, if HE is the creator of which I also have no doubt, then can't he have induced in us all those qualities which had not resulted in the current anarchiac situation. Does this not create an doubt over his abilities? Or it is so that this world is an laboratory where the Almighty is experimenting. Nice wite. I would like you to go through my poem TEMPLE VISITORS on almost similar subject. Thanks for sharing.

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Babatunde Aremu 21 October 2012

Wonderful poem. Keep it up.

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Hans Vr 21 October 2012

The content of this poem is really close to my heart. Our God is the most gracious and merciful So true And equally true, there is only one God Our mind is too limited to understand the full greatness of God That is why religions have different perceptions of God Each perception we have of God is an oversimplifications If all of us will realise (and one day we surely will!) none of us reaches the full truth about God, it will be easier to throw of our arrogance and illusion that God will provide salvation to only one religion. The real problem Akaksha, is the scholars and leaders of religions They are the ones with the doubts and try to get power and influence by breaking other religions down. The greatest sign of weakness is if a leaders tries to derive strength from criticising his or her opponents or whoever is dfferent. Strong leaders derive their stength from preachign what they believe in and not from instilling hatred towards others. Actually I do not need to write it all here again, you have said it so well in your excellent poem.

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Valsa George 21 October 2012

Yes, all religions converge to one God who is father to all and we are brethren! ! Great thoughts, Akanksha and beautiful write! Congrats! !

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Amanda Laurent 21 October 2012

I like that you wrote about how even though we're different, we have the same basic values and love of God. I think people need to remember this more often! Great job.

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The message is universally appreciable though very little can be done as of now. The assurance given to the Creator of your perception is innocent and sincere. The little world around you has started expanding now Akanksha, keep it up...

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Unwritten Soul 21 October 2012

The poem has strong voice, keep it up_Soul

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Aung Si 21 October 2012

Good job! the last stanza is quite agreeable for any one.Well done! ! ! ! my vote is 9.

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Villiamor Calventas 21 October 2012

nice one a poem of the love of God whoever He is wherever He is.

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Yash Shinde 20 October 2012

beautiful description of the divine painter................sounds like a a hymn written in english

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 October 2012

u are a gem as seen in the poem

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Poetheart Morgan 20 October 2012

God do and give all to us, man search others ways to use your grace!

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Free Bird 20 October 2012

God is the only one who is close to our hearts and m too proud that God has given me everything and everygood blessings of him.thanks alott for sharing

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Asif Andalib 20 October 2012

You are still a kid but your heart is big You know where is gold and just where to dig Excellent write my little sister, I give you 10++

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Ency Bearis 20 October 2012

Good cogitations about God, creative logical reason.

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Akanksha Bhatt

Akanksha Bhatt

Dehradun India
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