Simply beautiful, all these things You've made,
Warmth of the sun along with cool of the shade,
Whom to give legs to walk, whom to give wings,
Yes! You are Lord of Lords and King of Kings,
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vryyyyyyyyy nice.......dear...beautifully written with a beautiful thought......keep it up dear...............
Powerful, every word is painted with delicate candor, amazing use of metaphors to expand the text. A lovely write to the great creator. A lovely read
fabolous beautifuly designed and it seems passion in your wriiting and thoughts are very nice and clear
fabolous beautifuly designed and it seems passion in your wriiting and thoughts are very nice and clear
SPLENDID! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It echoes like the pristine voice (This poem in its own way different, uniquely reflecting the ideas) left behind by the great legacy of GEORGE HARBERT, who have coalesced beautifully the spiritual & metaphysical thoughts in his poetry... Great write
This is the first poem of yours I've come across.Such an amazing poem.The content, rhyme and rhythm are all so beautiful and enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan
Beautiful. Appreciating God vis-a-vis ourselves. Close to a prayer. A 10/10 from me. Thanks for the ref.
A stupendous write! Hats off. I like your honesty.Thanks for sharing your thought.
More river of knowledge and words in the desert of your rhymy land. I didn't only enjoy the rhymes of the poem, but the eloquency of the poem, is undisputable. It's heart renewing; calling us back to Our Maker who saw we enjoy the air we breath in now and tomorrow even without out giving testimony for such unending favour. Nice poem from wise young hand.
You and Luke have created a smashing poem.once again a wonderful insight from a young person. This poem is powerful as it touches on what is happening in the world right now. An ACE poem!
Wow! This poem takes my breath away, with a great message, superb write!
fantastic poem.......strenghthens my faith and devotion in god lovely work by both of you
You definitely Aced this very beautiful write. Our Creator God is gloriously depicted in your write. Very creative in words and details. Magnificent and I really enjoyed it! ! ! ! ! ! !