Monday, October 22, 2012

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Rating: 3.9

Simply beautiful, all these things You've made,
Warmth of the sun along with cool of the shade,
Whom to give legs to walk, whom to give wings,
Yes! You are Lord of Lords and King of Kings,
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Patricia Grantham 09 April 2014

You definitely Aced this very beautiful write. Our Creator God is gloriously depicted in your write. Very creative in words and details. Magnificent and I really enjoyed it! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Shraddha The Poetess 07 September 2013

vryyyyyyyyy nice.......dear...beautifully written with a beautiful thought......keep it up dear...............

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Kevin Patrick 09 November 2012

Powerful, every word is painted with delicate candor, amazing use of metaphors to expand the text. A lovely write to the great creator. A lovely read

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Indrajeet Mishra 07 November 2012

fabolous beautifuly designed and it seems passion in your wriiting and thoughts are very nice and clear

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Indrajeet Mishra 07 November 2012

fabolous beautifuly designed and it seems passion in your wriiting and thoughts are very nice and clear

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 04 November 2012

SPLENDID! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It echoes like the pristine voice (This poem in its own way different, uniquely reflecting the ideas) left behind by the great legacy of GEORGE HARBERT, who have coalesced beautifully the spiritual & metaphysical thoughts in his poetry... Great write

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 October 2012

This is the first poem of yours I've come across.Such an amazing poem.The content, rhyme and rhythm are all so beautiful and enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Villiamor Calventas 27 October 2012

pray..God is but one no matter your religion is

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Beautiful. Appreciating God vis-a-vis ourselves. Close to a prayer. A 10/10 from me. Thanks for the ref.

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Free Bird 25 October 2012

just wow for it :) keep it up dear! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 23 October 2012

A stupendous write! Hats off. I like your honesty.Thanks for sharing your thought.

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Onyeme John 23 October 2012

More river of knowledge and words in the desert of your rhymy land. I didn't only enjoy the rhymes of the poem, but the eloquency of the poem, is undisputable. It's heart renewing; calling us back to Our Maker who saw we enjoy the air we breath in now and tomorrow even without out giving testimony for such unending favour. Nice poem from wise young hand.

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Kevin Halls 23 October 2012

You and Luke have created a smashing poem.once again a wonderful insight from a young person. This poem is powerful as it touches on what is happening in the world right now. An ACE poem!

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Hazel Durham 23 October 2012

Wow! This poem takes my breath away, with a great message, superb write!

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Yash Shinde 23 October 2012

fantastic poem.......strenghthens my faith and devotion in god lovely work by both of you

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Dave Walker 23 October 2012

A fantastic poem, it's good to have faith.

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Akanksha Bhatt 22 October 2012

Thank you so much Mr. Luke Easter.

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Akanksha Bhatt

Dehradun India
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