Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Accused For Innocence Comments

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you've done nothing wrong,
they can't prove a thing...
and what do they do? Still
accuse you for innocence.
...
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Sasha Claire Beckains
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Bri Edwards 24 January 2013

i'm REALLY not sure this qualifies as a poem, but it might. and even if it doesn't, i do like it. only one suggestion here. watch out for spelling contractions correctly. you use several contractions with the appropriate apostrophe, but twice you typed your when you probably should have typed you're. just trying to be helpful! thanks for sharing.

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Sasha Claire Beckains

Sasha Claire Beckains

Cebu, Philippines
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