i'm REALLY not sure this qualifies as a poem, but it might. and even if it doesn't, i do like it. only one suggestion here. watch out for spelling contractions correctly. you use several contractions with the appropriate apostrophe, but twice you typed your when you probably should have typed you're. just trying to be helpful! thanks for sharing.
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i'm REALLY not sure this qualifies as a poem, but it might. and even if it doesn't, i do like it. only one suggestion here. watch out for spelling contractions correctly. you use several contractions with the appropriate apostrophe, but twice you typed your when you probably should have typed you're. just trying to be helpful! thanks for sharing.