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beautifull poem and a prayer to a departed soul? . wonderfull words.nice write, voted 10 surya

Fantastic poem, specially the middle few lines...

its a very nice poem! you're a natural :)

Rajkumarda, All of us judge and are judged hence.... Judgeing has its uses, and then some... You are an acute judge of life, and have an eye for detail. Subroto.

Sometimes we are punished for the crime we didn't commit............And that make punishment more unbearable...............perhaps it was karma of our past lives............only god knows............poignant write........10+++........

Last four lines are touching and sorrowful...makes the reader feel sorry for the concerned person...great write

Full of poignance. Well written with right amount of emotion and feel.