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Nice one. Be what u truly are and what u believe in. Repetition of title gave life to poem.

Sounds like you had to get something off your chest! Loved the poem but always proof read and know what words means...'sign' did you mean 'sigh' as in breathe and being 'meek' is not a form of weakness it actually means 'power under control'. It's all in love because you have the makings and passion to be even a better writer. Keep the dictionary close to you...I know I do. Great last line...loved the resolve. Published some new writes...pls. check them out, Thanks!

just be the way you should be and not just the way you wanted to be.... anyway, poem is well written/expressed

Hard to pick who they are meaning them..has to be your parents? for who else would keep you under a microscope...nothing wrong with ambition keep that up, regards

Interesting poem well express

interesting poem. I'd say more but I'm kind of fried right now. sorry.

Great idea and definite improvement. Keep writing!