Tuesday, October 7, 2008

According To Mark Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I have lost faith it is because
Faith has been stolen from me;
I’ve been a mark, swindled and duped—
Not having squandered faith,
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Gary Witt
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 February 2012

I like the way you put the words naturally to show the poem theme as it is - and touching all of us in our humanity, for at one time or another - we are this. It takes an excellent writer to do that in a few lines, like you do.

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... Dog God 8hate 18 April 2010

....& It must be acknowledged as a mere guest, Mister Faith, He has His own agenda, and... (only) includes ye in accordance fate... My Faith has waned since youth, and, the irony, I'm am stronger... who can conceive the stealth of goD but... goD (Dog spelled backwards) ? .....................................................................

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George F. Hunter 29 May 2009

To lose faith is to gain reason. Good thoughts and construction.

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Tsira Goge 07 October 2008

Interesting poems. Perfectly I understand you... It is difficult to us to find true without doubt... The father accepted the prodigal son big pleasure than obedient the son... It is pleasant to hear, that the belief all the same in the heart of a shower breathed at the lyrical hero in it a poem... 10...

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Robert Quilter 07 October 2008

The line that made me stop and think was 'I could not know how much faith i had, until i had no more....' very true.

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Linda Winchell 07 October 2008

Great write Sir Gary! I am a Minister of God and I too have had this faiths challenge. Glad you know where your's is at.

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