Saturday, August 18, 2007

Accidents Of Footsteps Comments

Rating: 3.9

Rain your heart with its inside soft tissues
The stimulus of the thoughts that from there fly
Every hour of the weaving dark dripping issues
Into the earth and up to the very high
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Peter S. Quinn
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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 October 2019

" Rainforest leaves promoting natural lines' Superb narration as also flight of imagery. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Peter S. Quinn 03 October 2019

Thanks so much everyone, I was not expecting this, but I am very happy... :)

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Chinedu Dike 03 October 2019

A poignant rendition nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 03 October 2019

Congratulations! Your poem displays some innovative and refreshing language. Profound and in-depth. Thanks for posting. : -)

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 October 2019

Lonely thoughts gone walking through each its mile/// excellent poetic expression

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Dominic Windram 03 October 2019

Excellent poem Peter. I particularly like the innovative rhyme scheme you have employed here...congratulations!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 October 2019

I am glad that this poem has been selected as the member poem of the poem of the day for second time.Thanks again.

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Peter S. Quinn 05 October 2018

Thank you all, for liking my poem, Accidents Of Footsteps - I am deeply honored and grateful.

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Captain Cur 03 October 2018

Who can define the human heart? A tricky instrument to master that often gets played. Accidents of footsteps, maybe an evolutionary mistake walking those straight and curved lines, miles and miles, to what end, calamity? An interesting write, I imagine each reader will see it through there own individual experiences and footsteps. Congrats on being selected.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 October 2018

Lonely thoughts gone walking through each its mile The straight lines and curved ones you can not keep Each to its stimulus and calamity worth...........so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem shared amazingly. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 October 2018

Splendid write indeed. Enjoyed from start to the end. Wish the should not end. 'Accidents of footsteps in its own while Everything since here from the vapors deep With clever breath dispersal by a verve birth Lonely thoughts gone walking through each its mile..' is beautiful. Congrats.

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Irfanulla Shariff 03 October 2018

Rain your heart with its inside soft tissues…….Great metaphor and imagery! Peter, very thoughtful poem of the day.........Congratulations!

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Tom Allport 03 October 2018

A wonderful poem of unintentional broken hearts? ...........well penned Peter

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 October 2018

Accidents of footsteps, its stimulus and calamity worth! - nicely penned

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2018

Up to the very high! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Haidee Majola 03 October 2018

Accident of footsteps shared in a nicely packaged poem. Congrats for POD selection poet Peter.10+++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 October 2018

Peter, such a profound poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen....10+++++++++++++

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