Rain your heart with its inside soft tissues
The stimulus of the thoughts that from there fly
Every hour of the weaving dark dripping issues
Into the earth and up to the very high
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Thanks so much everyone, I was not expecting this, but I am very happy... :)
A poignant rendition nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing.
Congratulations! Your poem displays some innovative and refreshing language. Profound and in-depth. Thanks for posting. : -)
Lonely thoughts gone walking through each its mile/// excellent poetic expression
Excellent poem Peter. I particularly like the innovative rhyme scheme you have employed here...congratulations!
I am glad that this poem has been selected as the member poem of the poem of the day for second time.Thanks again.
Thank you all, for liking my poem, Accidents Of Footsteps - I am deeply honored and grateful.
Who can define the human heart? A tricky instrument to master that often gets played. Accidents of footsteps, maybe an evolutionary mistake walking those straight and curved lines, miles and miles, to what end, calamity? An interesting write, I imagine each reader will see it through there own individual experiences and footsteps. Congrats on being selected.
Lonely thoughts gone walking through each its mile The straight lines and curved ones you can not keep Each to its stimulus and calamity worth...........so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem shared amazingly. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Splendid write indeed. Enjoyed from start to the end. Wish the should not end. 'Accidents of footsteps in its own while Everything since here from the vapors deep With clever breath dispersal by a verve birth Lonely thoughts gone walking through each its mile..' is beautiful. Congrats.
Rain your heart with its inside soft tissues…….Great metaphor and imagery! Peter, very thoughtful poem of the day.........Congratulations!
A wonderful poem of unintentional broken hearts? ...........well penned Peter
Accidents of footsteps, its stimulus and calamity worth! - nicely penned
Up to the very high! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Accident of footsteps shared in a nicely packaged poem. Congrats for POD selection poet Peter.10+++
Peter, such a profound poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen....10+++++++++++++
" Rainforest leaves promoting natural lines' Superb narration as also flight of imagery. Congrats on poem of the day.