Sunday, December 30, 2007

Accidental Smile Comments

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there were two people met
they're walking in the street
one was an old man
other was a boy
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Maria Sudibyo
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Tsira Goge 01 July 2008

You have perfectly caught this instant, Maria, and have given us - readers chance to smile from the third party, it is fine... Best wishes, Tsira

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~ Jon London ~ 01 May 2008

Great poem...a fine write and yep...smiles are addictive..and lift your spirits all the best jon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 March 2008

smile is the best medicine........................

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