Tuesday, June 24, 2008

Accidental Necessity Comments

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I've had the worst
of both your worlds.
Is there a third
that will unfurl?
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Michael Fischer
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Greenwolfe 1962 28 June 2008

Whether accident or necessity, here it is again. A broken structure. Poems cannot have structures of this kind. They are too short for variations. GW62

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Emancipation Planz 24 June 2008

PS.. I tink my tongue picture is bigger and better than yours.... what do you tink?

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Emancipation Planz 24 June 2008

The last stanza tells me that you never read the manuals... aroha... PS that tis called 'Essentially Male'..

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Michael Fischer

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