Thursday, March 5, 2009

Accidental Meeting Comments

Rating: 5.0

I made a wish and here you are
Now that we have met, you come far
You arrived in my life in a cacophony of sound
As your car hit mine and turned me round
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Myrtle Thomas 07 April 2009

Awe this is so sweet, I hope it didn't just end there. A beautiful sweet write.Very much enjoyed.Thanks A 10

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Fay Slimm 19 March 2009

LOve this narrative Gordon - feels warm and hope the ending was all you wished -- a good read and 10 from Fay...

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Bonnie Collins 18 March 2009

This is very tender and sweet, and what a nice person you are to have done all that after an accident... Very sweetly potraied... Bonnie

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Christine Kerr 15 March 2009

Love your title, First chance meetings always seem to be a great topic. This one takes the cake. Well Done

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annie okia 10 March 2009

Sounds like you're a good man to ''bump'' into...... lunch too. alana

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T McH 07 March 2009

Well... if you can charm a girl after trashing her car, you sure have talents elsewhere as well as in poetry! :) t x

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

Oxford - England
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