Thursday, January 21, 2021

Accident - Ατύχημα Comments

Rating: 4.8

Handsome man from Stuttgart

Talking straight to her heart
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Kostas Lagos
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Suzon Albert 22 January 2021

Just accident. Not in fate to have her love.

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M Asim Nehal 22 January 2021

The twist in the end took it to a different level and converted a proposal into limerick, Smart thinking Friend.10**

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 January 2021

Cutest crystal clear limerick, dear poet! To my favourites and 5 stars for you. I have enjoyed very much!

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Varsha M 22 January 2021

And all five fingers in bowl, head bowed down and glued, as if nothing else viewed, your startled look made no difference indeed, for meat was yummy indeed.

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Varsha M 22 January 2021

Handsome man from Stuttgart Talking straight to her heart He made her a dinner Tasty meat with ginger which she licked like a kid, for it tasted yummy indeed....

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Varsha M 22 January 2021

You just can't live without jokes isn't it. I'll edit a bit just for fun....hope you don't mind.

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Anjandev Roy 21 January 2021

Well written.....like it...thank u, dear poet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2021

Amazingly humorous limerick. Unfortunate incident but what matters is his true and loving heart. Cleverly crafted

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