Accident Comments

I really enjoyed this poem! hands down favorite line: My brain is full with hunger. My life is full with competitors. Responsibilities are on my shoulders. Difficulties are my teachers. Enemies are sensual pleasures Keep up the good work!

Wonderful write expressing a certain restlessness. Most of our accident have a definite purpose. Responsibility can give satisfaction Whatever, choose to enjoy what you are doing and all will go well.

i can relate dude coz your poem's so alive

You know, you can never escape from that accident! Even though this is an accident for you....it has been firmly established within your heart without your permission And also even that permission can't be allowed without your eager mind! Am I right?