Saturday, October 25, 2008

Accident Comments

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It was spring
the day I galloped
from my mother’s wound.
I was an accident, she said.
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Caroline Misner
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Fay Slimm 25 October 2008

Beautifully poetic Caroline - your choice of phrases is so good. I love the opening of you 'galloping from your mother; s wound' - excellent read. Greetings from Fay.

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