Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Accident Comments

Rating: 5.0

I, see you
Sitting softly.
Upon that stone cold stair.
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Shaun William Hayes 09 September 2008

Good work, spoilt a little by typo in third stanza, otherwise a novel approach in a concise manner. Like it.

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