Monday, May 12, 2008

Access Comments

Rating: 3.7

In a crowded lunch, a wireless chat took place
From soil to sky with a cozy crystal-soul.

A long emotional table
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Ashraful Musaddeq
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Ejaz Khan 05 July 2009

Not even time can determine which of the possibilities are more probable. A fantastic write!

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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

''We alone looking each other Butterfly was the witness of that epic! '' I love this lyric romantic poem and the finer feelings suggested....10++++

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'....chat took place From soil to sky with a cozy crystal-soul' 3 Ss 'Soil, Sky, Soul'...wow...! ! ! a 10+ dr. sakti. Namaskar...India...17.06.09.

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Untold access to an undiscovered world? what an inspiring imagination... nature to nature and what will bethe result...beautiful tale....10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 June 2009

Untold access to an undiscovered world? how nice the line is!

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Brishti Mazumdar 04 June 2009

wow...Ashraful...I loved it...a fiction is told in just few lines....Hummm...I am really loving your miser way of using words....Your thought process will always get my 10++...Your fan Brishti

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Pramod Thomas 03 June 2009

good piece of true fiction

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a heart stirring poem. a good poet.10 shan

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

very imaginative indeed...simply great expressions..very nice 10++

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Subroto Chatterjee 05 May 2009

Yes, Its access, just the way poets at PH are doing all the time...welcome tot the cyber world. I liked the 'long emotional table'...getting smaller. Flat, flat universe. Keep on Ashrafu! Cheers. Subroto

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Vidi Writes 06 January 2009

Humans with so many activities Eat, drink, sleep work, think sink, jump shout, cry Kill, give birth so and so and so.... Among all... If one can have the ACESS The one described in this wonderful poem... We will start wondering about all those activities. Sense of this Wonder Will make Wonder on us. Thank you.

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Tj Becker 26 October 2008

Your works have me in awe as your imagination doesn't travel the same path as others. You venture into new ideas and take us mentally to places no one else has. I'm so glad that I found your poems, through your works my mind will be expanded.

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Ramin Chaman 25 October 2008

But I think life is like the war.we must be a warrior.

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Aijaz Asif 24 October 2008

it is mere tale and composition of dream, a tale of love beautifully described in these few lines.....it is true when one you love is infront of you enery other thing vanishes...a great write with lot of feelings in it Asharf bhai...10++++

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Albert Wong 21 October 2008

What a special style you have created, Ashraful Musaddeq, appreciate very much for your success offer you with marks ~10~ I would read more about your poems.

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Jester's P 14 October 2008

we are good at making judgment of what is good and what is bad; or what true and what is falsehood, so on and so fort. however this is what i reflected 'to understand the what is in the between of good and bad; true and falsehood'. your poem is an access...the access between two poins which 'the betwen' is a reality among this two poins. great work...and i like it.

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Subbaraman N V 12 October 2008

Great untold access to the undiscovered world!

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Thad Wilk 10 October 2008

A cozy chat from soul to sky, cyberspace 'is the place' - where dreams can multiply! Thank you for this lovely poem you have - transported ! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Chitra - 06 October 2008

Reading this mystic poem I too got teleported to a uncharted realm

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Marilyn Lott 05 October 2008

You open up many avenues with your words, make the reader ponder. I enjoyed this very much. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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