Saturday, October 29, 2005

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we are God's absurd ulcer
waking up and shutting down
filling our waste dumps
with glitter and sounds
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Bera Tremoz
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Michael Philips 29 October 2005

What a provocative title that is for what seems like a negative outlook. The first line is a real grabber. Nice job.

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Max Reif 29 October 2005

Whoa! This is profound! On the other side of this poem is someone who's gone pretty deep, I feel.

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