Friday, March 23, 2018

Accepting The Will Of Fate [ 2 Tanka ] Comments

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We just go through life
Drifting wherever it flows
Entrusting our life
To the hands of the divine
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2022

A fantastic Tanka! This great poem has a strong leg.....liked it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 March 2018

A beautiful poem masterly crafted. It depicts the realities of life.10

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Nudershada Cabanes 23 March 2018

Thank you Rose Marie for your warm comment and for the visit.

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Perdita Young 23 March 2018

Excellent metaphor about the mortal journey of life... Sometimes it's really foolish to struggle against the almighty Fate.

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