Tuesday, February 12, 2008

Acceptance Of Fate Comments

Rating: 4.9

Of all the lessons learned in life
By every creed in turn,
Acceptance is the costliest
Mankind has had to learn.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Drew Engman 15 April 2020

Wow, I’m blown away, so deep and well-said; thank you.

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Such an incredibly written poem...it flows with rhythm and wisdom. Exceptional. I'll give it a rare 10

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Fred Babbin 09 October 2010

Your writing is so transparent. That's good, unless you're looking for mystery. Also, your poetic structurre is very finished. I like the poem.

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Venkatesh Jagannathan 04 August 2010

Amazing one. learning to accept the fate is indeed the biggest learning and your poem explains this in most intelligent way, that goes without a saying.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 September 2009

a great piece of wisdom...would help every one in life...goes into my favs

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Yelena M. 23 March 2009

'The hardest thing to realize, When all is said and done; Accepting losses in ones life, Is one sure sign you've won.' True and wonderful lines and superb poem as a whole. Very enjoyable to read and, like it was said in a comment here, has much food for thought. Best wishes. A.

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 15 March 2009

Double edged..isn't it? Deep and has much food for thought.

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Madison Yeater 13 March 2009

This stanza 'Acceptance of this living truth Is not so hard to bear. It's something man can't seem to learn In struggles everywhere.' oh its sooo true. some people cant seem to take a grasp onto acceptance. thats one huge problem i encounter in life, but you gottta do what you gotta do. and learn to take what you have, apply it to yourself and get on with your life. nice piece.10+ as i felt it from my heart.

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Meggie Gultiano 02 March 2009

words of wisdom and humility planted here in the garden of my heart, .. Nice, nice..what more can i say? Hugs, Meggie

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Barry A. Lanier 22 February 2009

A wonderful poem with poignant thoughts and classic advice...I believe I knw you ten years ago when I wrote my poem 'Acceptance'...I don't know if it's worthy but I do know that my counselor I've been seeing for 5 years hasa it hanging on his wall on a plaque....yes acceptance is the key to 'freedom' from whatever issue we are faced with, , , , , Bravo Greenwolfe, , , , ,

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Frieda Lumpkins 20 February 2009

This poem is very touching, and I loved it very much

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Vaibhav Pandey 10 February 2009

a great thoughtful write sir.....your sense of rhyme and rhythm is unparalled. 10++++++++++

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Amber Roser 09 February 2009

a beautiful poem that articulates one of the most important lessons (i think) that one can learn in life. excellent!

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Allan Macli Borges 08 February 2009

it's hard to accept the losses of life, but it's the better way to overcome the sadness and anguish, and we have all to gain trying this way. good message have your poem.

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Carl Harris 07 February 2009

This is a beautifully expressive poem which is excellently phrased from beginning to end, Greenwolfe. Despite the fact that it was in effect 'teaching a lesson, ' it was not preachy in any way, and your words flowed like apple cider at harvest time. It's indeed a well thought out poem, solidly constructed in every verse. The most important thing, however, is that it is a delight to read. Carl.

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Miriam Maia Padua 04 February 2009

great write.. a piece that tells everything we have to know... on the reality of life...the acceptance of our fate whatever it maybe... only in acceptance we can move on and feel happy and savor the beauty of life... this piece imparts knowledge and wisdom...and the contentment in life from the writer himself...thanks for sharing and thank you so much for your valuable comments and tips on my works...God loves a cheerful giver... ..thank you so much.10+++++ for this sir...

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You wrote exactly what people need to know... I love your poems!

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Rita Shay 20 January 2009

Brilliant! Your poems are some of the best I've seen on this sight. However I couldn't help noticing that of the poems I've read of yours so far, they all rhyme. I really hope a writer like yourself does not restrain his talent in rhymes. Best wishes -Rita

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 January 2009

great poem..wise words..'acceptance is the key and success too even after loosing- great 10

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Carol Fletcher 20 October 2008

I also share this philosophy: If a problem seems unbearable, then change your perception! This is a wonderful piece of artistry and awareness!

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