Of all the lessons learned in life
By every creed in turn,
Acceptance is the costliest
Mankind has had to learn.
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Such an incredibly written poem...it flows with rhythm and wisdom. Exceptional. I'll give it a rare 10
Your writing is so transparent. That's good, unless you're looking for mystery. Also, your poetic structurre is very finished. I like the poem.
Amazing one. learning to accept the fate is indeed the biggest learning and your poem explains this in most intelligent way, that goes without a saying.
a great piece of wisdom...would help every one in life...goes into my favs
'The hardest thing to realize, When all is said and done; Accepting losses in ones life, Is one sure sign you've won.' True and wonderful lines and superb poem as a whole. Very enjoyable to read and, like it was said in a comment here, has much food for thought. Best wishes. A.
Double edged..isn't it? Deep and has much food for thought.
This stanza 'Acceptance of this living truth Is not so hard to bear. It's something man can't seem to learn In struggles everywhere.' oh its sooo true. some people cant seem to take a grasp onto acceptance. thats one huge problem i encounter in life, but you gottta do what you gotta do. and learn to take what you have, apply it to yourself and get on with your life. nice piece.10+ as i felt it from my heart.
words of wisdom and humility planted here in the garden of my heart, .. Nice, nice..what more can i say? Hugs, Meggie
A wonderful poem with poignant thoughts and classic advice...I believe I knw you ten years ago when I wrote my poem 'Acceptance'...I don't know if it's worthy but I do know that my counselor I've been seeing for 5 years hasa it hanging on his wall on a plaque....yes acceptance is the key to 'freedom' from whatever issue we are faced with, , , , , Bravo Greenwolfe, , , , ,
a great thoughtful write sir.....your sense of rhyme and rhythm is unparalled. 10++++++++++
a beautiful poem that articulates one of the most important lessons (i think) that one can learn in life. excellent!
it's hard to accept the losses of life, but it's the better way to overcome the sadness and anguish, and we have all to gain trying this way. good message have your poem.
This is a beautifully expressive poem which is excellently phrased from beginning to end, Greenwolfe. Despite the fact that it was in effect 'teaching a lesson, ' it was not preachy in any way, and your words flowed like apple cider at harvest time. It's indeed a well thought out poem, solidly constructed in every verse. The most important thing, however, is that it is a delight to read. Carl.
great write.. a piece that tells everything we have to know... on the reality of life...the acceptance of our fate whatever it maybe... only in acceptance we can move on and feel happy and savor the beauty of life... this piece imparts knowledge and wisdom...and the contentment in life from the writer himself...thanks for sharing and thank you so much for your valuable comments and tips on my works...God loves a cheerful giver... ..thank you so much.10+++++ for this sir...
You wrote exactly what people need to know... I love your poems!
Brilliant! Your poems are some of the best I've seen on this sight. However I couldn't help noticing that of the poems I've read of yours so far, they all rhyme. I really hope a writer like yourself does not restrain his talent in rhymes. Best wishes -Rita
great poem..wise words..'acceptance is the key and success too even after loosing- great 10
I also share this philosophy: If a problem seems unbearable, then change your perception! This is a wonderful piece of artistry and awareness!
Wow, I’m blown away, so deep and well-said; thank you.