Acceptance Comments

Empty to find love no matter how or who Someone to accept the two She’s the strongest person he knows At night she shuts her doors Cries with much remorse mmm strong and well written poem

Clueless as well as careless; with the muse of life. However, we do learn always from our mistakes. So move on with your dreams. Nice work.

This is a window, slightly opened, into the beauty of a soul's strength. Thank you

Delicious this is. Yes! This one line: ...Her meaning of soul searching... Melissa? You have purpose. You have meaning. AND...Her 'meaningful' soul searching... adds, to me, much more depth to the depth that is already there. Think about it. Even if you decided to leave this 'fantastic' poem the way it is, it is still great. Nice.