I played all my cards
I took the chance
Of being wanted by you
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I love this. The structure, the balance, the poignant subject, it all works so well. Thank you June.
In the middle of the deepest pain is a sweetness, and that sweetness is hope, hope is the last to die. You keep knocking on doors June. Very honest and nice poem. Raymond
When we can accept that there will many failed relationships in our lives, then we can go out with a clear conscience and find someone who is more our style, and has some things in common. Love is a reciprocal commodity, because when you love someone, and that someone doesn't reciprocate, then the relationship never got started. Thank you for sharing these wise verses. Hugs, Barbara
I can definately feel the emtion in the piece. Short and concise but powerful.
Very Nice! Its funny how you follwed the same order I did on my poems a while back. Keep thinking that way. Trust me it will get you far. Don't think of what could have been and the day you shall have her by your side. Think of what the future holds for you and yearn for the day you shall move on. Well back on the topic of your poem, Great! I give it a 10 :)
Full of emotions with simple expression. I like it june.
This poem is wonderful- it expresses your emotion, and gives hope for the future- great write :)
faith, hope, courage, acceptance help us go on with chin up. time does heal, and we learn to smile again' although i am in constant pain, i just know i would love again.- nice lines June Mamta
I know the feeling..feels terrible indeed....and you v expressed your emotions in few words..i liked that.in fact thats what i cant do..some of mine are bit too long..anyway thanks ma'm 10_++