Saturday, May 31, 2008

Acceptance Comments

Rating: 3.5

Listening to the birds a chatter and the
mother's feverishly trying to teach the
young how to eat, with each little
move she made, the young would
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Bonnie Collins
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Lynn Glover 30 July 2010

The teaching of the children are a continuous involvment of both parents and we still don't understand why we can't learn like the squirrel and the bird. Thanks for a reminder of a lesson learned many years ago, that your poem allowed me to put back into play in my life. Great write, Lynn

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Naidz Ladia 01 June 2009

i like the line'do not ask, just accept'..this is very nice dear..the poem expresses good attitude..naizz

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Kesav Easwaran 29 April 2009

beautiful observation there, Bonnie...birds and animals...may be they are wiser...and less intelligent compared to the human beings...insightful write...10

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Linda Weischedel 07 April 2009

EXCELLENT POEM! ! ! I so enjoyed this write, I am giving you a 10. Hugs, Linda

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Ana Zaldivar 03 February 2009

Many things happen for a reason, and I beleive I read this for a reason, it has a bog lesson in between each word. Lovely Bonnie, you know I'll always love your poems :) Love, ana

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 25 December 2008

that was a lovely poem...the squirrel is not a great thinker but it lives...we think and choose without accepting what is there and we dont live-10

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Marilyn Lott 01 November 2008

I think we can learn a lot about the simplicity of life from little creatures. Well written, Bonnie. '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Stacey Watts 20 September 2008

Wonderful poem as alway very intelligently put. I do love this piece it is possibly one of my favorites of yours.

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Robert Sheridan 16 September 2008

Bonnie, You put a lot of deep thought into your words which are quilled with perfection. Thanks always for sharing your talent! Robert

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Andrew Blakemore 04 June 2008

This is great Bonnie. I love the way you have used mother nature as our guide to life. Excellent poem. Love, Andrew x

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