Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
Feeling fear
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Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work.
Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend.
Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done.
Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing.
Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too... Siya_! !
Awesome rhyming a very smooth flow in your poem, Louis.Outstanding work! Arild
Magnificient poem... I like the rhyme in it.... Well written...poignant write
Truly said and very heartfelt expressions to endear the readers with impressionism.I liked it
nice expression, few words it contains but extensive sense it creates.nice work, keep writing.
An impressive write freely expressing the true feelings of the soul through a few poignant words! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
‘I must perform /For when I stop the stage is gone’ ~ Like mythological sphinx who rose from ashes and started flying …bytes of teaching in economy great write… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
You have said so much in so few words. Sincere acceptance is food for the soul. Well done my friend.
Great Poem!