Saturday, January 9, 2010

Acceptance Comments

Rating: 4.9

Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
Feeling fear
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Louis Cecile
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Maria Mitea 01 June 2022

Great Poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

They are not sincere! Thanks for sharing.

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Leslie Philibert 16 March 2014

Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work.

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Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend.

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Hardik Vaidya 16 March 2013

Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done.

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2012

Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 May 2012

Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too... Siya_! !

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Rekha Mandagere 26 April 2012

Excellent write. there is nice flow and rhythm here :)

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Arild Ertsland 16 March 2012

Awesome rhyming a very smooth flow in your poem, Louis.Outstanding work! Arild

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Lawrence H 16 March 2012

Louis, nice and very good rhyme poem. Is this a Haiku poem?

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Ramesh Rai 13 February 2012

xlent. i liked it.For when I stop the stage is gone

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Heyyou Boy 09 January 2012

Short and to the point. I like these. Great poem

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Vipins Puthooran 01 October 2011

Magnificient poem... I like the rhyme in it.... Well written...poignant write

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 September 2011

Truly said and very heartfelt expressions to endear the readers with impressionism.I liked it

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Swarnendu Biswas 10 August 2011

nice expression, few words it contains but extensive sense it creates.nice work, keep writing.

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Romeo Della Valle 07 August 2011

An impressive write freely expressing the true feelings of the soul through a few poignant words! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 September 2010

‘I must perform /For when I stop the stage is gone’ ~ Like mythological sphinx who rose from ashes and started flying …bytes of teaching in economy great write… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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You have said so much in so few words. Sincere acceptance is food for the soul. Well done my friend.

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