Accept Everything Comments

this whole poem was good, what caught my eye is this part 'Cowards fall back and brave only rises' ! great write

It a nice piece, I especially like the last two stanzas. Question, ' You may not know what is next due? is this a statement or question? Is it why you should be sad? or Why should you be sad? I like the phrase 'Look up and walk with elegance. I think you focus too much on rhyming that you sometimes lost the essence. You don't really need rhyme to create rhythm. Nice piece anyhow.

I have to agree...We have to accept everything but sometimes we don't want to...

i love the way you say...so smooth and soft for the heart....prefect....the.. i do of the eyes to read....God bless this poem....a 10 ++++

Nice theme..nice wording...last stanza is superb

Try to pick up what ever you can from nature Everything hinges on little hopes for future Raise your head with pride and say Rest all will be history to pave the way..........................simply wonderful write, quite inspirational to great height, as it tells everything how rave on this world by nature, great write,10+++, thanks for sharing

it inspire me a lot! ! ! uh lala! ! ! god created world and every existence to praise him and to experience what life should be everything in this world has it own purpose according to his great plan... we must live in his word...in his presence... God give us serenity to accept the things we cannot change...

We have to accept everything..a very positive and powerful message poetically expressed. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you in the new year! Yelena M.

Accept everything as a gift of life.Excellent works Hasmukh!

a powerful message. Thanks for the nice thoughts.

Dear Sir, Thank you very much for this poem. It will be moved to my favorite list. I enjoy your work and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. There are a lot here! This is a 10 for me and that means a lot. It is hard for me to find someone who is similiar in writing style and their poems inspire me as well. I thank you for your writing style..... J. l.

this poem is an advice to some people... nice write!

i really liked this poem..its serene...advising one to not get caught up in judgements and examining things so intently that it damages or destroys the beauty and joy of the moment

it provides energy and hope for the day to come

wow! a wonderful hope of harmony...so deep that my sphere of life..... rendezvous the beautiful tomorrow of my life... my success would be our prosperous banquet for your one of my best friend in land of poetry.... may your poem be amongst the inspiring wisdom of these ages... may God bless you.... a star for you and a 10 +++++

Accepting everything is the chanting objective and success of life, anywhere without fail. Read and shared dear poet. +10

It is hard to accept everything at times but I do Try to accept the things that come my way This was an excellent poem indeed thanks for sharing with me Melissia Ann

I won't accept everything but this I will: this poem is great! 10!

Faith in oneself is the mainstay…with acceptance = tolerance = endurance are qualities of braves…and winners… 10+ Ms Nivedita UK Flowery Christmas and New Year Greetings Please visit my page and grace by your comments if please… niv

Exellent, visional, exhuberant and and illuminative, a nice peice of writing