Mind and body, you accelerate
With belief to give you powers, great
That you can influence your own fate
To brighten your natural state
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Undaunted ‘Self Confidence’ can make mountain to walk on to you…Yeah its our ‘Choice’ [not chance] to shape/configure us…this [poetry] generates much acceleration… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [Heart felt - hf]
Fate; future; accelerate - fantastic. Impatience gets in the way, rescued by faith needing inflation, upliftment. Salvation and success, then acceleration. And the rhymes make me dance! A great message here, Obinna. Enjoyed this a lot.
A very inspiring message expressed in your verse, Obinna..As always, perfect rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.
Yes, mind can do miracles, if only it constantly guards against distractions like impatience and hatred, and is driven by an abiding faith in the Divine. Thank you for the positive message.
accelerate, great, fate, the author had a good search for rhymes, excellent collection of high sounding vocabularies, verily, verily the lines are in deep thoughts.Lots of thinking I should say.
Faith, bright to have, you can inflate. Your very faith, you must update. ----- great rhymes and rhythm...well crafted with nice theme...10
you have brilliant ideas and you know how to express them so well, I love it
Real Inspirational poem I love it! ! !