Thursday, May 18, 2006

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THE sky splits open, like a angry mouth,
the planets begine to play basketball,
as your moods start to swing.
YOUR telescope hitz a home run, then
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Ruby Root 18 August 2006

Hi David, Very different. I am not sure what bipolar is. I thought it was more of a mood thing. Your metaphors are used well. Great imagery. Excellent.

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DAVID..AWESOME SPIN INTO THE INTANGIBLE SPECTRUMS OF THE MINDS-EYE...MASTERFUL IMAGERY...NEED TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK... YOU DISPLAY A KEEN SCOPE FOR THE ABSTRACT...NICE WRITE, DAVID

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Duncan Wyllie 22 May 2006

Very hard for those afflicted by this, this is well written, Love Duncan

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***** ********* 18 May 2006

Best stay off the pills David, Add an S to the title darling, it's a 'an angry mouth' cool insight you have. Those men in white coats keep calling but I hide inside my computer, they can't get me there! lol Grinning at you, Tai

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