Abyss Comments

every star has an end

Seventeen years passed, Few atoms are lost, Death is knocking at a Star...; ; ;

Seventeen years passed, Few atoms are lost, Death is knocking at a Star.

Seventeen years passed, Few atoms are lost, Death is knocking at a Star.

Musing along with life! Then comes death. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

An original view of life and death. 'Abyss' is the right metaphor for death. I had to read your poem carefully and think about 'few atoms are lost'.