Friday, November 24, 2017

Abyss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sunken Dreams
To the icy depths
Gathered then locked
Into the black abyss
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Tom Allport
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Yiyan Han 20 January 2018

Human often creates black holes for ourselves

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Susan Williams 06 December 2017

Very good use of words: Sunken - icy depths- the black abyss- Titanic tears- survivor's- forever in distress. All these words increased the emotional impact as did the title. Well written, Tom..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 November 2017

Such a fine poem, Tom.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 November 2017

Beautifully crafted write about loss.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2017

Sunken dreams and survivor's love which remain in forever in distress. provoke thought. Loss is so sad. This is brilliantly penned poem is shared with perception...10

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