Abyss Comments

Human often creates black holes for ourselves

Very good use of words: Sunken - icy depths- the black abyss- Titanic tears- survivor's- forever in distress. All these words increased the emotional impact as did the title. Well written, Tom..

Such a fine poem, Tom.....

Beautifully crafted write about loss.

Sunken dreams and survivor's love which remain in forever in distress. provoke thought. Loss is so sad. This is brilliantly penned poem is shared with perception...10