Thursday, October 7, 2010

Abyss Comments

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Once again we fall into a deep abyss
We live out our lives wondering and wondering
Down we fall till we hit rock bottom
Our lives intertwined, our minds pulled together
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Martina Salazar
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Adeline Foster 28 October 2010

Interesting poem. You bear my middle name, named for my grandfather Martin. This is a good poem until one comes to that last line. I do hope the lack of a period means that it is not really the end. Adeline

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