Monday, November 26, 2012

Abyss Comments

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forsaken in the abyss of affection
she was forced to endure the pain of being loved
each caress leave scars
upon her drowning soul.
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lei vicente
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Marvin Brato 29 September 2013

Sad sentiments but very expressive!

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Harindhar Reddy 15 September 2013

love is abyss as heaven's bliss, can feel pain of protagonist, simply sweet and humbly great poem.

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Amanda Laurent 26 November 2012

A beautiful, truthful account; it is not always easy to be open to receiving love. Great write!

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