Tuesday, January 17, 2012

Abusive Lover Comments

Rating: 3.3

I loved you tender, I loved you passionately
Everytime I think about you it's bittersweet
I'll always love you but you've dealt with me as if casually
Hurting me with lies and deceit
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Marcquiese Burrell
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Khairul Ahsan 15 July 2013

Teen age lovers often get overwhelmed by their first love and take everything at face value unhesitatingly. Then they discover: Somewhere along the line you've became corrupt not hesitating once, getting myself caught in your web who would have known these feelings would erupt? As you'd devour me completely The pains of mistaken love are hard to overcome. Nicely expressed in this poem.

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Sara 30 October 2012

This poem was beautiful; as your other one, , it displays a depth of pain with relationships. Giving ourselves to somebody inreturn being hurt by them, , is the worse kind of pain. Betrayal.

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Rajendran Muthiah 17 January 2012

When one is caught and injured in the web of a deceitful love, the feelings rise giving birth to a beautiful poem like this. Cheers!

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