Abusive Love Comments

And I thought child abuse is punishable in the US,

I also related to this poem because it reminded me of the day when i got assaulted.

OH..... I loved it so much! ! ! My dad used to abuse me a lot. Even though we do not have a good relationship, I still have a really good relationship with my mother because that is the only person (besides my relatives and siblings and stuff) who cares about me. I want to thank you for writing this because it was wonderful to read. THANK YOU! ! ! ! ! GOD BLESS YOU! ! ! !

WOWW! ! Literally blown away! Took on a massive topic and covered it very impressively! Amzingly brave.10 +++

you are very talented. I ca only hope those words are not true

Dear Tiffany, they say that realistic, simple and direct poetry is the best. I agree, and this is what you did. I will remember this poem for years to come, for I had the same experience, and because my dad is now getting stronger, to, , in my mind. Thank you for touching me so deeply, it's been a while...

sad poem..well expressed and written well..the rhymes well emphasized..very good..10

This is a poetic cry for help written with intensity and a good feel for rhyme. You certainly have a talent for expressing yourself in verse. I look forward to reading more of your work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

i can see the whip of the belt, the red of your skin, the cry in agony i have to close my eyes after i read the last lines i feel so helpless at this point you touched me at the core of my heart.......this is a devestating position to be in i can only pray for you and you deserve a trillion for this piece honest poetry 10

wow, compared to this my poem is shit: ( good job :) very deep

Wow! how is ALLL Of your peoms so good? ? ? ? ? jk lol But really this is EXCELLENT :)

Very sad very powerful very well written Thanks