Sunday, May 26, 2019

Abused To No End Comments

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She was so nice.
And made all of the sacrifice.
She gave up her dancing dream.
But he still treated her so mean.
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Lamar Cole
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Aqua Flower 04 June 2019

A sad but often true story for some. A good write about the realities of life. Turning your back on family and your support is never a good option. Good write.

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Brian Taylor 26 May 2019

Great poem! I love the rhythm of the poem.

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2019

" " She was so nice. And made all of the sacrifice. She gave up her dancing dream. But he still treated her so mean. For him she turned her back on family and friends. But he still abused her to no end" " " ..... beautiful

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