Cinderella was a nice gal
Always did what she was told
Put others before herself
Cinderella had lots of hopes and dreams
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This sounds very much like a movie I would pay to see. Nicely penned with a deep imagination!
Well penned. Dreams can be realized in another realm. Thanks for sharing, Perhaps you may enjoy some of my poems. Many blessings, Keep writing, Vada Thomas
lovely poem; the story about Cinderella has been my favorite story since childhood.
Highly imaginative and realistic poem and it is wonderfully good in all respects.
WOW, i think that that is all i can say...and thats a good thing trust me!
well..... it is sort of nice. well keep up the gud work Mrs ravenstar
This poem explains what will truly happen to any girl who lived like Cinderella for Fairy God Mothers don't exist and won't be there in times of help. Truly beautiful. I loved how you made it happy at the end.