Sunday, April 20, 2008

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My thoughts are here
Then roam about
I just feel like screaming out
Screaming
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Helena Alvarez
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Sonia Irizarry 18 September 2009

as a child i when true alot, I do wish if U are get hElp, , , , Some on the poem say's U will be Strong! ! ! ! ! ! ! Don't ever Give up, , Talk 2a friend or someone u thrus.

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Wandering Scarlet 20 April 2008

INTENSE well written, hope u arent gettin abused.... if so then i'm so sorry to hear that. otherwise GOOD JOB ROCCO

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this poem should make everyone more aware about the druel things that happen in this aweful world.......VERY nice! ......keep it up! ! ! ! !

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Tai Chi Italy 20 April 2008

Hello Helena, I hope this very good poem on the vileness of abuse, isn't personally inspired and if it is....please get some help. NO ONE has the right to hurt physically or otherwise, another human being, and if they tell you they do....Tell a policeman and they will find out what is true. As to the question of the poem, whether it makes them feel big. I doubt that, most abusers are victims of abuse themselves....it is a learned characteristic and they need to unlearn it to recover....Their victim needs to love themselves and not allow such abuse. I would kill anyone who tried that with me and that is a fact. I would rather go to prison or be dead than suffer abuse. Great little thought provoker you are, smiling at you, Tai

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Matt Soriano 20 April 2008

nice write i hop to see more of your stuff on the poem bord! 'write on'

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