Sunday, January 18, 2009

Abuse Comments

Rating: 5.0

laying in bed,
half in, half out...
the dream realm just
out of my reach.
...
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Dolan Doran
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Laurie Hill 20 February 2009

Very graphic imagery, Very well written and very disturbing Poem.

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Darkness Everywhere 02 February 2009

this is a very good poem well done. i know that feeling its horrible. hope your doing better now?

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John Smith 31 January 2009

Powerful poetry. Amazing job. Please continue writing!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 January 2009

The breath leaves the body........the woofing last wind brings along the rusted memories, for good.Nice writes Dolan.

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Dolan Doran

Dolan Doran

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