Friday, March 28, 2008

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She is living her life black and blue.
After all drinking and drugs she asks god what to do.
One night she decides to pack up and go.
She sneeks out the window to what place she dont know.
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Shastina McElmurry
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Shekhar Joshi 05 November 2009

A sad Poem on a topic worth writing............nicely written.............liked it...... ;)

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Yassar Ali 03 June 2009

Great point made. Keep up the good work

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada 08 April 2009

This is very amazing, I do have friends who have this problem, and this sort of thing happens to them, I feel sorry for anyone who has to go through this. Very good way of capturing the way they feel.

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Mike andrew 28 March 2008

very good and deep poem keep up the writing

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